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01 June 2006 @ 10:32 am
Fic: [VM] Ultimatum (Logan/Veronica) PG.  
Title: ULTIMATUM
Author: Amalia Kensington ([info]amaliak)
Rating: PG
Fandom/Pairing: Veronica Mars, Logan/Veronica
DISCLIAMER: I own nothing. Rob Thomas is king. All hail.
Spoilers: Through 2x01. A/U.
Summary: A different scene. It should have happened like this, but it didn't.



Veronica is staring at their entangled hands. She's trying to keep herself in check because she needs to get this out, but the look of complete anguish on his face is just making it that much harder.


"I kept thinking that if I just stuck by you…" she trails off, taking a deep breath and deciding to start again. "Logan, I thought that maybe all of…this that's going on was just a phase, something you had to get out of your system and that you'd get better. But you're not getting better. Instead, you're making things worse, cruising around with your toadies, hatching plans and refusing to let things get back to normal. Someone's going to get killed, Logan."


"Someone was already killed!" Logan argued back, pulling away from her. "Or did you forget?"


Veronica's jaw tightened just a little.


"I just don't want anyone to get hurt. I don't think it's right to be actively seeking these types of revenge. It drives me crazy to think that maybe some little part of you might be enjoying it. It's petty and selfish and you're above that."


Logan looked at her shell shocked for a minute. "You think I'm enjoying it? You think I'm being selfish?" his voice was dangerously quiet. She could see the anger in his eyes, mixed in with the tears. "They scared us to death, Veronica. Do you remember that?!" his voice was rising in volume as he was getting more agitated, standing up to tower over her. "They're trying to hurt you! And you think I'm being selfish by going out there and showing them that I'm not gonna take it?"


Veronica finally snapped, standing up to meet him. "You're scaring me, Logan! You're hurting me!" Her voice cracked at the end as her tears finally broke through.


This silenced Logan immediately, deflating his anger completely. He tried to place a hand on her shoulder to pull her towards him but she violently pushed him away.


"No, this isn't a game, Logan."


"I know, dammit!" he snapped back at her.


"No, I really think you don't. Do you know what it's like? Do you? Do you have any idea what it feels like to nearly kill myself worrying about you? That every time that you leave my sight, it might be the last time that I see you? I hate it, Logan!" She stood in front of him, not bothering to wipe the tears from her eyes. "And I'm not going to do it anymore. It's killing me."


There was an eerie sort of silence.


"Are you breaking up with me?" Logan asked quietly.


Veronica tried to get a handle on her anger.


"No, I'm not, Logan," she said in a gentler tone. But her words where still laced with steel. "I'm giving you an ultimatum. You have to choose between this insane vendetta of yours or me."


"It's not that simple, Veronica," Logan started.


"Yes, actually, it is," she interrupted him. "It is. So here we go, right here, right now. What's it going to be?"


Just then the front door opened and Keith Mars walked in. The tension in the room hit him like a ton of bricks.


"Kids," he addressed them tentatively.


Veronica ignored him, continuing to stare at Logan.


"Figure it out," she said quietly. With that she turned around and left Logan and her father standing in the living room, shutting the door to her room quietly.

END


A/N: Yes, I'm still writing...something. Whatever.
Please review. I like to know that people are actually reading. ConCrit is gold.

cheers.
--Lex
 
 
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( 11 comments — Post a new comment )
Mackenzie[info]ziebra on June 1st, 2006 06:05 pm (UTC)
I like Logan's quiet reactions.... like he is thinking things through before he answeres.
jcalla[info]jcalla on June 1st, 2006 06:11 pm (UTC)
That was awesome. I so wish it would have happened that way. It works well as a oneshot, but I would love to see the outcome too. Anyway, great job.
Handful_of_Moxie[info]btownmoxie on June 1st, 2006 06:20 pm (UTC)
holy shit....
i wish it really happened like this. are you going to continue? I hope so. it was awesome.
you've joined the ranks.[info]thatmarsgirl on June 1st, 2006 06:46 pm (UTC)
I love this and if you continue, cookies for you! Ha ♥
lapdogdesign: VM LV takemyhand[info]lapdogdesign on June 1st, 2006 07:04 pm (UTC)
I like this a lot. If you continued it, that would be great. But whatever it is, keep writing!
[info]sitebuilderchic on June 1st, 2006 07:42 pm (UTC)
This is good. Please please continue!!!
iwillrememberu: LoVe - Rooftop Hug[info]iwillrememberu on June 1st, 2006 07:55 pm (UTC)
Ahhh that's definitely what should've happened! Thanks for writing it :)
[info]klawick003 on June 1st, 2006 08:59 pm (UTC)
I really enjoyed this, although it was really short. Can't wait for more...nice job.
Living Dead Girl: logan in diner[info]candlewaxdreams on June 1st, 2006 09:56 pm (UTC)
Ooh, if only it could have happened like this. Please continue!
→ i love you, but i've chosen darkness[info]lovecost on June 2nd, 2006 03:42 am (UTC)
I like this.
And this is how it should have happened! :/
Tala!: vm love[info]starlitgrove on June 2nd, 2006 12:35 pm (UTC)
I really wish it happened like this... Great fic!